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the physics of love and letting go by Kasia
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derilicon
 20 Jun 2011, 00:21 #120993 Reply To Post
I can see this book going straight in at number one.
Sorry to everyone else about being so mean with the ratings I've giving, but the above work is what I've been saving my near-top marks for because the writing is so fluent. So this is one of only a few books I've read so far which I wish I could have written this well (my stuff is crap in comparison to everyones btw)
good luck to all
deril
Kasia
 22 Jun 2011, 17:05 #121267 Reply To Post
Thanks Deril - that was a nice surprise. I found your comments really useful and made some changes as you suggested (not all but most).

derilicon
 22 Jun 2011, 23:03 #121285 Reply To Post
i'm honoured if I've suggested something you've found worth including as a change to your already excellent piece.
I don't think anyone else has ever taken the slightest bit of notice, which is fair enough of course. I think in my 1st review I suggested someone add more colons...but since then I've come to my senses, lol.
congrats on being at 16, you need to get 8 reviews to go top five i guess
good luck again
deril
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