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safiaadam
 08 Feb 2012, 04:22 #141338 Reply To Post
Many thanks for your recent review. It was really helpful to get another male perspective on this and you made some salient points, particularly about the characters and the weightiing of the parallel stories.
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rayfs
 08 Feb 2012, 07:01 #141340 Reply To Post
Quote: safiaadam, Wednesday, 8 Feb 2012 04:22
Many thanks for your recent review. It was really helpful to get another male perspective on this and you made some salient points, particularly about the characters and the weightiing of the parallel stories.


Hi again, Safia.
Thanks for the thanks and I'm glad you found some of my comments useful. It sounds as if your story will be a good as it continues.
Good luck with it.
Ray
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