Quote: safiaadam, Wednesday, 8 Feb 2012 04:22Many thanks for your recent review. It was really helpful to get another male perspective on this and you made some salient points, particularly about the characters and the weightiing of the parallel stories.
Hi again, Safia.
Thanks for the thanks and I'm glad you found some of my comments useful. It sounds as if your story will be a good

as it continues.
Good luck with it.
Ray