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Xean
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Thank you for your read, Jo. A sentence got mangled in my review, sorry about that. I was just commenting it did not seem coma provided full connectivity of the story throughout, as the middle part of your story seemed free of any coma relation. I don't think it detracts from your story in any way though. Good luck with your story. Waking Daisy
This post was last edited by Xean, 04 Jul 2011, 22:08
Quest to illume true bliss, part of and beyond the self.
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rt1905
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Xean, I think you've misunderstood the use of this forum. It's a place where reviewers recommend outstanding stories that they've come across. Please look at previous posts. I'm not saying Waking Daisy and the other books you've referenced aren't stories you would recommend, but your posts would be better placed in 'The place where everyone knows your user name'.
This post was last edited by rt1905, 06 Jul 2011, 11:48
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Quote: rt1905, Wednesday, 6 Jul 2011 11:44Xean, I think you've misunderstood the use of this forum. It's a place where reviewers recommend outstanding stories that they've come across. Please look at previous posts. I'm not saying Waking Daisy and the other books you've referenced aren't stories you would recommend, but your posts would be better placed in 'The place where everyone knows your user name'. I was going to mention exactly that. Then I thought - nah! X wants to be everywhere - similar to dogie poo papa stas (who's going out to purchase a sooper-dooper-pooper-scooper)
“The true sign of intelligence is not knowledge but imagination.” - Albert Einstein
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Alasdair
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A good read though - it deserves a mention here!
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JOGS
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Quote: Alasdair, Wednesday, 20 Jul 2011 21:34A good read though - it deserves a mention here! Thank you, Alasdair
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