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gabriella
 03 Feb 2010, 16:31 #81232 Reply To Post
One of the best pieces of writing I have come across on this site. Beautifully done. Poignant, touching. Blatantly honest. Heartbreaking. Truly a remarkable piece.
Jen

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panurge
 05 Feb 2010, 16:06 #81323 Reply To Post
I agree. Beautifully written with a distinctive voice and mood. Well worth reading.
Palache
 05 Feb 2010, 18:28 #81333 Reply To Post
Everything Mona writes must be good. I've read 'Sour Jasmine' and 'Salty Waters' and found both to be superb. I always feel culturally enlightened after reading her works. I sure hope they get published.
monayasir
 01 Mar 2010, 02:31 #82724 Reply To Post
Thank you Gabriella and thank you all so very much.
Gosh, I have not read the message board in ages and missed this. I think to be appreciated by your peers and such great writers all, is such a joy and this post has made me thrice elated.
Thanks guys.
Gabriella, I was going to email you to thank you for your lovely review of Unfinished Work but your email address is not posted. It's strange that some people respond really positively to this story and others don't know what they felt, or don't like it at all. I guess it depends on where your readers are themselves emotionally.
Anyway, from your mouth to the publisher's ears.
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