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sarsen
 02 Sep 2010, 17:58 #97901 Reply To Post
Thank you, Thorne. I note the 'they - we' issue, and you are right, it should be we. Changing from an omniscient pov I rewrote the story in first person but missed that one.

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sarsen
 02 Sep 2010, 19:05 #97905 Reply To Post
And a spuggy is a house sparrow.

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