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This is Violence(Revised) by James Holland
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kazmojazz
 03 Mar 2011, 11:31 #112213 Reply To Post
I've just reviewed this and it's amazing! I recommend it to anyone that fancies a scary, menacing read. Just wish I'd written it.
Beth
kazmojazz
 03 Mar 2011, 12:46 #112224 Reply To Post
Quote: kazmojazz, Thursday, 3 Mar 2011 11:31
I've just reviewed this and it's amazing! I recommend it to anyone that fancies a scary, menacing read. Just wish I'd written it.
Beth


Oops! I meant anyone 'who', of course.
Midwinter Jim
 03 Mar 2011, 18:17 #112257 Reply To Post
Quote: kazmojazz, Thursday, 3 Mar 2011 12:46
Quote: kazmojazz, Thursday, 3 Mar 2011 11:31
I've just reviewed this and it's amazing! I recommend it to anyone that fancies a scary, menacing read. Just wish I'd written it.
Beth


Oops! I meant anyone 'who', of course.


Thanks Kazmojazz,

Your review and this post have made my day. As well as being really nice, you made some excellent points that I will definitely include in further drafts.

Thanks again!

kazmojazz
 03 Mar 2011, 19:13 #112266 Reply To Post
You're welcome. It was a wonderful read. I've been thinking about that clown ever since!

Have you finished the whole novel? I'd really love to read it.
Beth
michellebeaching
 04 Mar 2011, 20:24 #112418 Reply To Post
Oh, no. I was about to go and read it when you said 'clown'.
Is it a scary clown?
Scary clowns really . . . scare me
I am such a wimp about scary clowns and ventriloquist's dummies - my late night horror film youth catching up with me.
Tell me the truth. If it's not a scary clown, I'd love a good read.
He who dares...
is daring.
Midwinter Jim
 04 Mar 2011, 20:53 #112431 Reply To Post
Quote: michellebeaching, Friday, 4 Mar 2011 20:24
Oh, no. I was about to go and read it when you said 'clown'.
Is it a scary clown?
Scary clowns really . . . scare me
I am such a wimp about scary clowns and ventriloquist's dummies - my late night horror film youth catching up with me.
Tell me the truth. If it's not a scary clown, I'd love a good read.


It's a scary clown. Well, not really really scary. More, ominous. There's no gore. I'm sure you could handle it!
chickin
 21 Mar 2011, 10:11 #113720 Reply To Post
Can I register in the fan club please?

This is amazing - loved it.
I deleted my sig.
Midwinter Jim
 21 Mar 2011, 17:07 #113764 Reply To Post
Quote: chickin, Monday, 21 Mar 2011 10:11
Can I register in the fan club please?

This is amazing - loved it.


Thanks chickin. Your review was insightful and made me smile lots and lots.

You are more than welcome to join the fan club. Membership is at the reasonable price of £149.99. I take visa, mastercard, paypal, and cold hard cash. You'll get a monthly newsletter and a signed photo. In my honest opinion, it's amazing value.

So, don't delay, sign up today!

chickin
 21 Mar 2011, 17:22 #113765 Reply To Post
Quote: Midwinter Jim, Monday, 21 Mar 2011 17:07
Quote: chickin, Monday, 21 Mar 2011 10:11
Can I register in the fan club please?

This is amazing - loved it.


Thanks chickin. Your review was insightful and made me smile lots and lots.

You are more than welcome to join the fan club. Membership is at the reasonable price of £149.99. I take visa, mastercard, paypal, and cold hard cash. You'll get a monthly newsletter and a signed photo. In my honest opinion, it's amazing value.

So, don't delay, sign up today!



You may jest, but I'm seriously considering it as a solid investment. A couple of years time I might be flogging that signed photo on ebay for a small fortune!!

Throw in a signed first edition, a personal invite to your launch party (somewhere with good food, free champoo, but encourages casual dress) and you've got a deal.
I deleted my sig.
annierab2
 21 Mar 2011, 22:46 #113797 Reply To Post
I just read the revision, did a FW for 5 stars. Brilliant rewrite.
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