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This is such a wonderful piece and a real delight to read.
Liam, if you are reading this, I have read the reviews and can only wholeheartedly concur with Alasdair's comments.
The shifting points of view work perfectly and are not confusing at all, in fact they are clearly integral to the tale.
The intelligent observations of Compton, the strong portrayal of the characters, the crisp, fluid language and dialogue, were a joy to read.
I recommend everyone to read this, it's an extremely accomplished piece of writing, and I sincerely hope this finds a publisher. I for one would pay good money to read more.
Good luck Liam and chin up, you are a writer and a very good one at that.
Jen
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