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"The Blue Curse" By Marita Hansen
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Kurtis
 03 Feb 2010, 02:25 #81182 Reply To Post
BRILLIANT! I have not read book that good. I am a pretty tough person to impress, and I was shocked that I liked it that much. Well Done, Marita!
Marita Hansen
 03 Feb 2010, 02:38 #81183 Reply To Post
Quote: Kurtis, Wednesday, 3 Feb 2010 02:25
BRILLIANT! I have not read book that good. I am a pretty tough person to impress, and I was shocked that I liked it that much. Well Done, Marita!


Hi, Kurtis. Thank you for your review and great comments. I may have to fix the bit with the crossover between reality and a dream. In the scene where the police came it was real, but in the next scene when Catherine wakes up it becomes a recurring nightmare. It was a phase into the next scene. I'll have a look at it and may make the two scenes more distinctive.

I read your bio. I've been to Japan (loved it). We went there to visit my husband's family. My nephew and brother-n-law speak fluent Japanese, but are Kiwis.

Ciao, Marita.
This post was last edited by Marita Hansen, 03 Feb 2010, 02:41
Kurtis
 03 Feb 2010, 02:44 #81184 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Wednesday, 3 Feb 2010 02:38
Quote: Kurtis, Wednesday, 3 Feb 2010 02:25
BRILLIANT! I have not read book that good. I am a pretty tough person to impress, and I was shocked that I liked it that much. Well Done, Marita!


Hi, Kurtis. Thank you for your review and great comments. I may have to fix the bit with the crossover between reality and a dream. In the scene where the police came it was real, but in the next scene when Catherine wakes up it becomes a recurring nightmare. It was a phase into the next scene. I'll have a look at it and may make the two scenes more distinctive.

I read your bio. I've been to Japan (loved it). We went there to visit my husband's family. My nephew and brother-n-law speak fluent Japanese.

Ciao, Marita.


Ciao, Marita.
Okay, I thought so. You have? I also love Japan. I would love to say that your overall ending was GRE.AT! Well done, keep it up!

Ciao, Kurtis
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