I've done some repairs as you suggest. I had no intention of sending any subliminal messages, not via this medium anyway. If I have I must have subconsciously sent "xcfterz" as you didn't get it. Now you say it though, I am subliminally inserting the idea of "five" as a favourable number. All below will bring unease and bad fortune. I will let you know the outcome but, stop! How will I know if I am well received? Or just subliminally cheating? Is this a conundrum? Will it work on publishers? Hmmmm... Thanks for a fair review anyway.
When a finger points to the sky, only a fool looks at the finger -
Amelie