Hi
Thanks for the kind review and ratings.
I think your problem with the ending is related to me trying to convey the narrator's confusion and her downwards spiral into hell, that she contrives to be unaware of, just as she has done with most of the important events in her life.
However, you are not the only person with this problem so the ending may need some work to make my point clearer.
Many thanks
Andrew
Memory... What was that?