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rayfs
 09 Feb 2012, 21:43 #142460 Reply To Post
Hi Katie.

Yes, it's me again. Sorry to inflict my stories on you, but thank you anyway for your review and comments about Aromas (revised). I have dealt with the missing apostrophe problem etc already, so thank you eagle-eye for pointing them out. The clues to Poppy's change in addiction started with the engine oil, petrol and leather smell which also stimulated the sense of touch with the leather jacket etc. The am dram was also part of the ongoing tongue-in-cheek story. Thank you for the scores, but don't know where the promised five got to!

You can always request another reading assignment if you get me again! (only joking)

Good luck with your writing and thanks again.

Ray
yellowchair
 09 Feb 2012, 22:18 #142467 Reply To Post
Hello Ray

Really sorry about the 5 - should have been for narrative voice. I don't know what happened there, and hope it got a 4 (as did some others), and that I didn't mistakenly click any lower than that.

Sorry to inflict myself on you again! All the best with this and all your others.

Katie
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