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davidlloyd
 26 Sep 2006, 13:31 #13590 Reply To Post
Thank you for your review of Warren Bank. I agree with you on chapter 1 it's a bit slow, it's something I have to look at. The repeats have been pointed out before so I have a lot to do in the next rewrite. As well as trying to speed up the story, I'm open to suggestions?
Cheers for your review.

David.
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