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KLM7640
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I recently had interest from an agent in New York who loved my opening few chapters. However, when he read the whole manuscript he suggested some serious re-writes - all plot-related. He felt that the storyline didn't follow on well from the opening chapters and I did agree with him on the whole. I came up with a new plot plan which I like, and which incorporated his suggestions, but he now seems to have gone a bit cold on me!
So my current dilemma is whether to go with my original storyline, or re-write with the new one!? I like both so it's hard to put my heart into re-writing...and I can't decide which one to go for.
My question is: can I post 2 synopses on here for feedback - my original storyline and the new one? Or are only opening chapters allowed? It would be quite an easy review for people - which one do you like best and why, with no feedback on writing style because it's plot only!
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Palache
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If you wish, feel free to send them to me by e-mail (address on my site). Sounds like a very interesting 'assignment' - I get to pretend to be a publisher. I'm sure you'll get a lot of feedback on this. Best, Jack
This post was last edited by Palache, 16 Jun 2010, 17:02
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perrybond
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Put 'em both up. We all want to vote on them. I suggest you'll get loads of quick free will reviews if you state you're just after a plot preference. Don't spend your credits on them though. I put up a mid chapter and specifically asked for a pov review. I got a general review that wasn't too good because he didn't understand the plot.
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KLM7640
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Thank you both so much! I will post both synopses in the next few days. I will of course return all free wills - I like doing plot plan reads myself too!
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KLM7640
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Update on this: I have now posted 2 synopses (synopsises? synopsi?) on my page. The two combined total over 5,000 words so I will return any free will reviews with a free will of your choice
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