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Story Title : A Belief in the Blood by Michael R
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 11 Sep 2007, 17:16 #20932 Reply To Post
Story Title : A Belief in the Blood

Author : Michael R

Genre : Literary Fiction, Novel

Review Extract from Review by Linda

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Hello Michael. This was an entertaining read, which flows really smoothly. Good sized paragraphs, except for a couple of really long ones. I think you are brilliant at writing dialogue. All the dialogue has a purpose and moves the story forward. No flowery stuff. It's certainly a believable setting. The post office. A man collapses and Richard tries to help. I'm intrigued by Kistine?

… A nice easy read, that makes you feel you'd like to read more. Linda.”

Synopsis
Richard pops into the Post Office to buy a stamp but, while he is there, something happens that will change his life dramatically.
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