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My opinion on "The Blue Curse" by Marita Hansen
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Ander101
 02 Feb 2010, 06:45 #81099 Reply To Post
Hello Marita,
I don't think I told you what I thought about your book enough, so I am going to tell you what I think now. I loved this book. You could understand how the characters were feeling and really see things from their point of view. My fave character was Catherine, she was very strong minded and didn't take any crap. Your theme is very good and you have good ideas. I will recommend this book to my nephews. You have a great talent at writing. I liked how you used the relationship between the two cousins, (Christopher and Stephen) it really added to the book. I also liked how you added a twin sister for Catherine, that alo added to the book. All the best for your book.
My Ratings:
Characters: 5
Themes And Ideas: 5
Settings: 4
Diolouge: 4
Narrative Voice: 5
Sorry don't know if their is anymore.
Regards,


Alexander
Marita Hansen
 02 Feb 2010, 06:58 #81101 Reply To Post
Quote: Ander101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 06:45
Hello Marita,
I don't think I told you what I thought about your book enough, so I am going to tell you what I think now. I loved this book. You could understand how the characters were feeling and really see things from their point of view. My fave character was Catherine, she was very strong minded and didn't take any crap. Your theme is very good and you have good ideas. I will recommend this book to my nephews. You have a great talent at writing. I liked how you used the relationship between the two cousins, (Christopher and Stephen) it really added to the book. I also liked how you added a twin sister for Catherine, that alo added to the book. All the best for your book.
My Ratings:
Characters: 5
Themes And Ideas: 5
Settings: 4
Diolouge: 4
Narrative Voice: 5
Sorry don't know if their is anymore.
Regards,


Alexander


Hi, Alexander. Your Freewill review came out of the "blue." Thank you very much, I appreciate your wonderful comments. My daughter saw your message on her computer as I was editing the story. Just wanted to know whether you read the copy with the "confirmation" topic or the newer "catechetical session" with the argument between Nicky and Catherine. It has added more dialogue.

I liked your suggestion for that sentence and have altered my line. It was interesting to find out that you live in Italy (Lucky you. I'd love to go there, as Italian Studies was my second major, along with Art History.)

Ciao, Marita.
Ander101
 02 Feb 2010, 07:11 #81102 Reply To Post
Hello Marita,
It was my pleasure reading your book. I have read your versions 2 and 3. I read it when it was the confirmation. I also read it afterwards for some fun reading. Changing it from a confirmation lesson to a catechetical session is better, as I was confirmed at 9. I hope your book does well, I'm happy I came across it. I can imagine it in real life, It's also got the potential of becoming a blockbuster movie. All the best.
Regards,


Alexander.
Marita Hansen
 02 Feb 2010, 07:20 #81103 Reply To Post
Quote: Ander101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:11
Hello Marita,
It was my pleasure reading your book. I have read your versions 2 and 3. I read it when it was the confirmation. I also read it afterwards for some fun reading. Changing it from a confirmation lesson to a catechetical session is better, as I was confirmed at 9. I hope your book does well, I'm happy I came across it. I can imagine it in real life, It's also got the potential of becoming a blockbuster movie. All the best.
Regards,


Alexander.


I love you, you should be my publicist.
Ander101
 02 Feb 2010, 07:25 #81104 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:20
Quote: Ander101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:11
Hello Marita,
It was my pleasure reading your book. I have read your versions 2 and 3. I read it when it was the confirmation. I also read it afterwards for some fun reading. Changing it from a confirmation lesson to a catechetical session is better, as I was confirmed at 9. I hope your book does well, I'm happy I came across it. I can imagine it in real life, It's also got the potential of becoming a blockbuster movie. All the best.
Regards,


Alexander.


I love you, you should be my publicist.



Ciao Marita,
It would be my honour to do that for such a talented writer!
Luth101
 02 Feb 2010, 08:36 #81106 Reply To Post
Quote: Ander101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:25
Quote: Marita Hansen, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:20
Quote: Ander101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 07:11
Hello Marita,
It was my pleasure reading your book. I have read your versions 2 and 3. I read it when it was the confirmation. I also read it afterwards for some fun reading. Changing it from a confirmation lesson to a catechetical session is better, as I was confirmed at 9. I hope your book does well, I'm happy I came across it. I can imagine it in real life, It's also got the potential of becoming a blockbuster movie. All the best.
Regards,


Alexander.


I love you, you should be my publicist.



Ciao Marita,
It would be my honour to do that for such a talented writer!


Hello Marita,
I have just told my family to read your book. Be prepared to get a whole lot of reviews tonight.
Crystal Baker.
Marita Hansen
 02 Feb 2010, 08:43 #81107 Reply To Post
Thank you, Crystal. It was really nice of you and Justin to review my book. Also pass on my thanks to Justin. I was happy that you both liked the story.

I have written the whole book, but I still have a lot of editing to do.

Ciao, Marita.
Luth101
 02 Feb 2010, 08:47 #81108 Reply To Post
Ciao Marita,
It was great reading your book, I did not regret it. Well done, can't wait to your book hits the stores!
Crystal.

Jacco101
 02 Feb 2010, 09:19 #81110 Reply To Post
Hello,
I enjoyed reading "The Blue Curse" By Marita Hansen. It is to young for me, but I liked it.
Marita Hansen
 02 Feb 2010, 09:25 #81111 Reply To Post
Quote: Jacco101, Tuesday, 2 Feb 2010 09:19
Hello,
I enjoyed reading "The Blue Curse" By Marita Hansen. It is to young for me, but I liked it.


Hi, Jacob. Thank you for reviewing my book. I read that you research WWII. I'm also interested in this era. I'm currently researching the Japanese invasion of Singapore, and would like to write a story on it, as I live in a house that was occupied by Japanese officers during WWII. They are called the "Black and White" houses.

Ciao, Marita.
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