Your observations are very much appreciated. And I accept what you say about detail. You'd laugh if you knew how many reviewers wanted more! I made the mistake, at one point, of
adding detail, and almost lost the plot! Several months and revisions later it's just about where I want it, but if I get a good suggestion...
You and I should have a contest to see who can write a story in the fewest words! I love doing flash fiction and it's a great discipline to learn. But I'm rambling, so many thanks again and good luck with your writing. Sue
the long and the short of it