Many thanks for your kind comments and scores, and particularly for answering the specific question about the backstory.
I take your point about the lack of settings - at this point in the story, the settings aren't really relevant, but I do have another fifteen hundred words in hand, so I suppose I could add some. But that does feel a bit too much like writing with the YWO scoring categories in mind. But then if I don't, I shall keep being marked down for Settings, which means no chance of the Pro Crit that I'm aiming for. Difficult.
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