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Marita Hansen
 11 Mar 2010, 03:20 #83446 Reply To Post
Hi,

You mentioned in your review of my story that you would be interested in reading any newly revised versions. On March 9, I uploaded "The Blue Curse (Updated Version)." This has a totally new scene in it (and the first classroom scene is now gone). I have also slightly changed the plot and weeded out unnecessary words. I have also altered Cristofer's personality (although he is still the main male character).

Ciao, Marita.
JAB
 13 Mar 2010, 14:01 #83620 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Thursday, 11 Mar 2010 03:20
Hi,

You mentioned in your review of my story that you would be interested in reading any newly revised versions. On March 9, I uploaded "The Blue Curse (Updated Version)." This has a totally new scene in it (and the first classroom scene is now gone). I have also slightly changed the plot and weeded out unnecessary words. I have also altered Cristofer's personality (although he is still the main male character).

Ciao, Marita.


Hi there, Marita.
Thank you for letting me know. I'm not sure if it will allow me to re-review but I will definitely get round to giving it a read - especially as hubby is away the weekend and I now have many hours to fill.
JAB
JAB
Marita Hansen
 13 Mar 2010, 14:45 #83625 Reply To Post
Quote: JAB, Saturday, 13 Mar 2010 14:01
Quote: Marita Hansen, Thursday, 11 Mar 2010 03:20
Hi,

You mentioned in your review of my story that you would be interested in reading any newly revised versions. On March 9, I uploaded "The Blue Curse (Updated Version)." This has a totally new scene in it (and the first classroom scene is now gone). I have also slightly changed the plot and weeded out unnecessary words. I have also altered Cristofer's personality (although he is still the main male character).

Ciao, Marita.


Hi there, Marita.
Thank you for letting me know. I'm not sure if it will allow me to re-review but I will definitely get round to giving it a read - especially as hubby is away the weekend and I now have many hours to fill.
JAB


Cool. I'll look forward to finding out what you think. You can let me know either by the free will option or by sending me an email, which is in my bio.

Thanks, Marita.

P.S. Do you want me to give you a free will? I like reading paranormal stories.
This post was last edited by Marita Hansen, 13 Mar 2010, 14:48
JAB
 13 Mar 2010, 16:52 #83632 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Saturday, 13 Mar 2010 14:45
Quote: JAB, Saturday, 13 Mar 2010 14:01
Quote: Marita Hansen, Thursday, 11 Mar 2010 03:20
Hi,

You mentioned in your review of my story that you would be interested in reading any newly revised versions. On March 9, I uploaded "The Blue Curse (Updated Version)." This has a totally new scene in it (and the first classroom scene is now gone). I have also slightly changed the plot and weeded out unnecessary words. I have also altered Cristofer's personality (although he is still the main male character).

Ciao, Marita.


Hi there, Marita.
Thank you for letting me know. I'm not sure if it will allow me to re-review but I will definitely get round to giving it a read - especially as hubby is away the weekend and I now have many hours to fill.
JAB


Cool. I'll look forward to finding out what you think. You can let me know either by the free will option or by sending me an email, which is in my bio.

Thanks, Marita.

P.S. Do you want me to give you a free will? I like reading paranormal stories.


Hi, Marita,
Yes thanks, a free will review would be welcomed - I'm always eager to know of other's opinions on my work. And I'll probably email when I've read yours, to save you having to keep checking for msgs on here
Take care
JAB
JAB
Marita Hansen
 09 May 2010, 11:30 #88032 Reply To Post
Hi Julie,

Just requested a new reading assignment and got "Changes" which I freewilled on March 17. Pity I wasn't allowed to review it again as you have probably edited it since then. I thought I'd let you know as it gave me a credit for freewilling it, which probably came from one of yours. I wonder whether my old freewill mark counts towards your total.

All the best,

Marita.
This post was last edited by Marita Hansen, 09 May 2010, 11:32
JAB
 09 May 2010, 12:10 #88034 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Sunday, 9 May 2010 11:30
Hi Julie,

Just requested a new reading assignment and got "Changes" which I freewilled on March 17. Pity I wasn't allowed to review it again as you have probably edited it since then. I thought I'd let you know as it gave me a credit for freewilling it, which probably came from one of yours. I wonder whether my old freewill mark counts towards your total.

All the best,

Marita.


Hey, Marita
I'm so glad I spotted this. I'd only come on the message boards to grumble about losing a credit in exchange for no review. I'm not sure if the free wills then go towards your scoring as with a free will the star rating you give is overall as opposed to the individualised rating we give for an assignment. Maybe there could be a way around this so your scores are still counted for a free will, but the writer doesn't lose their valuable reviews they've been lucky enough to receive.
JAB
Marita Hansen
 09 May 2010, 12:35 #88038 Reply To Post
Quote: JAB, Sunday, 9 May 2010 12:10
Quote: Marita Hansen, Sunday, 9 May 2010 11:30
Hi Julie,

Just requested a new reading assignment and got "Changes" which I freewilled on March 17. Pity I wasn't allowed to review it again as you have probably edited it since then. I thought I'd let you know as it gave me a credit for freewilling it, which probably came from one of yours. I wonder whether my old freewill mark counts towards your total.

All the best,

Marita.


Hey, Marita
I'm so glad I spotted this. I'd only come on the message boards to grumble about losing a credit in exchange for no review. I'm not sure if the free wills then go towards your scoring as with a free will the star rating you give is overall as opposed to the individualised rating we give for an assignment. Maybe there could be a way around this so your scores are still counted for a free will, but the writer doesn't lose their valuable reviews they've been lucky enough to receive.


Check your position tomorrow just encase it does get counted.
MLT
 09 May 2010, 16:34 #88060 Reply To Post
Quote: JAB, Sunday, 9 May 2010 12:10
Quote: Marita Hansen, Sunday, 9 May 2010 11:30
Hi Julie,

Just requested a new reading assignment and got "Changes" which I freewilled on March 17. Pity I wasn't allowed to review it again as you have probably edited it since then. I thought I'd let you know as it gave me a credit for freewilling it, which probably came from one of yours. I wonder whether my old freewill mark counts towards your total.

All the best,

Marita.


Hey, Marita
I'm so glad I spotted this. I'd only come on the message boards to grumble about losing a credit in exchange for no review. I'm not sure if the free wills then go towards your scoring as with a free will the star rating you give is overall as opposed to the individualised rating we give for an assignment. Maybe there could be a way around this so your scores are still counted for a free will, but the writer doesn't lose their valuable reviews they've been lucky enough to receive.


I had to allow an assignment to time out because I was in hospital. As soon as possible I freewilled it and was awarded a credit. I e-mailed Ted and asked him to return the credit to the author, which he did. This is an option if you feel guilty about accepting a credit for a freewill that has been converted.
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