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Marita Hansen
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ARGH!!!! I've finally got up the nerve and put on the next chapters for "The Blue Curse." They are chapters 3-5 and are a first draft.
It's full on action in these scenes, with another death (well sort of, you'll see what I mean if you read it). The reader finally gets to read the story from Cris' point of view, and gets a bit of background to his family's situation (a scene in Italy). There are two more possible villains introduced, to keep the reader guessing as to who the murderer is.
Stumpy, it's sort of bordering on horror again. But I suppose that's what dark fantasy is all about.
There is also a HUGE surprise with the nun.
Happy reading (well hopefully not unhappy reading, because that would mean the story sucks kumara).
In the words of Nessian. Adijo.
Marita.
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JAB
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Quote: Marita Hansen, Friday, 19 Mar 2010 08:37ARGH!!!! I've finally got up the nerve and put on the next chapters for "The Blue Curse." They are chapters 3-5 and are a first draft. It's full on action in these scenes, with another death (well sort of, you'll see what I mean if you read it). The reader finally gets to read the story from Cris' point of view, and gets a bit of background to his family's situation (a scene in Italy). There are two more possible villains introduced, to keep the reader guessing as to who the murderer is. Stumpy, it's sort of bordering on horror again. But I suppose that's what dark fantasy is all about. There is also a HUGE surprise with the nun. Happy reading (well hopefully not unhappy reading, because that would mean the story sucks kumara). In the words of Nessian. Adijo. Marita. Hey, Marita Glad you put them up at last. I've got a lot of stuff to plod through right now, but I promise to get to it as soon as possible. Hubby's away again the weekend, so maybe then I'll have time. Free will on its way.
JAB
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Marita Hansen
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Quote: JAB, Friday, 19 Mar 2010 09:16Quote: Marita Hansen, Friday, 19 Mar 2010 08:37ARGH!!!! I've finally got up the nerve and put on the next chapters for "The Blue Curse." They are chapters 3-5 and are a first draft. It's full on action in these scenes, with another death (well sort of, you'll see what I mean if you read it). The reader finally gets to read the story from Cris' point of view, and gets a bit of background to his family's situation (a scene in Italy). There are two more possible villains introduced, to keep the reader guessing as to who the murderer is. Stumpy, it's sort of bordering on horror again. But I suppose that's what dark fantasy is all about. There is also a HUGE surprise with the nun. Happy reading (well hopefully not unhappy reading, because that would mean the story sucks kumara). In the words of Nessian. Adijo. Marita. Hey, Marita Glad you put them up at last. I've got a lot of stuff to plod through right now, but I promise to get to it as soon as possible. Hubby's away again the weekend, so maybe then I'll have time. Free will on its way. Cool, thanks.
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