Hi Mike, thank you for your review, decent marks and very nice comments. Not too sure what to do with this story as I am just trying it out to see what people think. I didn't make the "attack" violent as I wasn't sure that it would suit the magazine it's aimed at, so had Charlie trip over his own feet instead. Maybe that makes it a bit tame. I'll get another couple of reviews in, see what the general consensus is and take it from there - or bin it! Good luck with your own stories. Thanks again, Pam.