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gabriella
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I have uploaded what may or may not be a prologue to my novel. I am looking for any kind of feedback but would like feedback primarily based on the categories we use in the reviews: characters, plot, setting, etc. This is not for any sort of chart placement. I do want to know you opinions on how to make it stronger, better. Thank you.
Jen "Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled." William Blake my blog
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Stumpy
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Hey Jen,
I'll take a look at the prologue if you want. I'll do it tomorrow, is that okay?
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gabriella
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Quote: Stumpy, Tuesday, 3 Aug 2010 19:44Hey Jen, I'll take a look at the prologue if you want. I'll do it tomorrow, is that okay? perfecto! Anything you want me to look at?
Jen "Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled." William Blake my blog
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JAT
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HI. I've just had a read & sent you a review. Although I'm pretty new at this reviewing malarky - so not sure how much use it will be.
Cheers, JAT
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Stumpy
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I would really appreciate your thoughts on THE FALLEN. Thanks very much
Cheers
Stumpy
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gabriella
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Quote: Stumpy, Wednesday, 4 Aug 2010 19:55I would really appreciate your thoughts on THE FALLEN. Thanks very much Cheers Stumpy I will get to it tonight or tomorrow.
Jen "Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled." William Blake my blog
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erict
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I've posted a review. I'd be interested to know if this is useful, weak or too harsh. To my knowledge I don't think I've been either thanked or abused for my reviews.
I've just uploaded a major rewrite of Ancient Warriors and would appreciate your own feedback on this.
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gabriella
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Quote: erict, Thursday, 2 Sep 2010 14:08I've posted a review. I'd be interested to know if this is useful, weak or too harsh. To my knowledge I don't think I've been either thanked or abused for my reviews. I've just uploaded a major rewrite of Ancient Warriors and would appreciate your own feedback on this. I did get your free will. Thank you! Nothing is too harsh to me anymore. I have rhino skin, now. Everything sort of rolls off, now. I take what I can use and discard the rest. I had no intentions of using the prologue in the story. I was thinking about submitting it for an anthology. Still haven't made my mind up. I will be more than happy to take a look at Ancient Warriors over the weekend.
Jen "Those who control their passions do so because their passions are weak enough to be controlled." William Blake my blog
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erict
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Not going to be a prologue - ok confused (I thought it said - this is a prologue...), but hope I helped. Will be interested to see whee you take the story. email and let me know if you post some
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