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awrigley
 24 Jan 2012, 22:09 #140407 Reply To Post
Given that my account is corrupt, who wants to exchange Free Wills?

If you do, please register here and review The Honest Burglar:

The Honest Burglar

Andrew
Memory... What was that?
ciaranl
 25 Jan 2012, 11:11 #140440 Reply To Post
Quote: awrigley, Tuesday, 24 Jan 2012 22:09
Given that my account is corrupt, who wants to exchange Free Wills?

If you do, please register here and review The Honest Burglar:

The Honest Burglar

Andrew


As I'm still scrounging for feedback on 'What happened To Bobby Roberts' and would appreciate your view, I'd be only too happy to take a look.

I've seen a bit of to-ing and fro-ing about The Honest Burglar and have just cast my eye over the opening sentences, but is there anything a reader should know about it in advance?
This post was last edited by ciaranl, 25 Jan 2012, 11:11
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awrigley
 25 Jan 2012, 14:05 #140453 Reply To Post
Ciaranl

Thanks, you're on.

Nothing a reader should know. A short story should stand alone, with no supporting context. It works, or it doesn't.

I will do one on yours in the next couple of days.

Andrew
Memory... What was that?
ciaranl
 25 Jan 2012, 14:26 #140455 Reply To Post
Just posted it. It's great. Apologies for the typos.

'Under the pillow', I meant 'under the bed'

'the their', I mean, 'the thief'

Time And Time Again
ZeBeDee
 25 Jan 2012, 22:40 #140483 Reply To Post
Ciaran

I have just done my review of your story. I have had to create a new account as my old one is corrupt.

For some reason, the review went through as an assignment review. Must've been something to do with my account being corrupt.

Regards

Andrew
PERRY
 26 Jan 2012, 01:39 #140488 Reply To Post
Done deed, Andrew - hope you don't find it too negative.
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