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ajblack4567
 10 Nov 2011, 14:08 #134775 Reply To Post
I'd always been curious about Flash Fiction, in the sense that it appealed to me but my instinct was it may not be that useful if you're hoping to write entire novels (no one trains for a marathon by running 100m sprints).

Recently, though, I've written quite a few Flash pieces merely because it fits well with the time I currently have to write. I would distill what I've discovered into two points, one positive and one negative (rather conveniently).

On the plus side, you can literally "take your words out and look at them", as we say in Ireland. In a 500/1000 word piece you can actually do a word-by-word audit and assess the effectiveness/appropriateness of each and every word. Of course, this is often necessary to meet a prescribed word count, but even when it's not necessary, the volume of writing you've produced is such that it is possible, surely even advisable. For me, this has helped me to identify certain bad habits I've developed around sentence construction and the over use of pet words. It has also produced some very lean, spare pieces of writing that I would never have landed on if I had twice the word count at my disposal.

However, like all strengths, this is also a weakness. What is lost when I write in this way is my voice, the elusive "writer's voice" which we're so often told is the single most important feature of our writing. I've found it impossible to bring my voice through in these Flash pieces. Some of them actually read like reportage, they're so denuded of my personality and writing style.

I'd be interested to hear what more experienced Flash writers think, and if they believe - in the long run - whether Flash helps or hinders their writing of longer fiction. Also, have they mastered the skill of writing so succinctly but retaining their own voice? Indeed, can it be done??
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sulcus
 10 Nov 2011, 14:50 #134778 Reply To Post
Quote: ajblack4567, Thursday, 10 Nov 2011 14:08
I'd always been curious about Flash Fiction, in the sense that it appealed to me but my instinct was it may not be that useful if you're hoping to write entire novels (no one trains for a marathon by running 100m sprints).

Recently, though, I've written quite a few Flash pieces merely because it fits well with the time I currently have to write. I would distill what I've discovered into two points, one positive and one negative (rather conveniently).

On the plus side, you can literally "take your words out and look at them", as we say in Ireland. In a 500/1000 word piece you can actually do a word-by-word audit and assess the effectiveness/appropriateness of each and every word. Of course, this is often necessary to meet a prescribed word count, but even when it's not necessary, the volume of writing you've produced is such that it is possible, surely even advisable. For me, this has helped me to identify certain bad habits I've developed around sentence construction and the over use of pet words. It has also produced some very lean, spare pieces of writing that I would never have landed on if I had twice the word count at my disposal.

However, like all strengths, this is also a weakness. What is lost when I write in this way is my voice, the elusive "writer's voice" which we're so often told is the single most important feature of our writing. I've found it impossible to bring my voice through in these Flash pieces. Some of them actually read like reportage, they're so denuded of my personality and writing style.

I'd be interested to hear what more experienced Flash writers think, and if they believe - in the long run - whether Flash helps or hinders their writing of longer fiction. Also, have they mastered the skill of writing so succinctly but retaining their own voice? Indeed, can it be done??


Like you I only moved into flash fiction due to available time to write (I was busy marketing my debut novel and wrote a new piece of flash each week as a promotion tool). One bonus was that having done it for every week for a year plus, suddenly I had an anthology - I culled 52 of 70 stories and put it out on Amazon kindle.

I agree with your strength of the genre. It allows for greater power within each word, greater lyricism and poetry if that's your leaning. Word choice is vital and as a writer you only have 1000 to hold in your head to reference when editing, which makes word choice so much easier to manage. No repetitions and some words can be chosen for their sound as much as their meaning.

As to your downside, I disagree. You fundamentally CAN get your unique voice across, but it does depend on what you're writing. I've met many flash writers online who tackle different genres each time and yet each is distinctively their voice coming through no matter the genre. I don't know what material you are writing about, but I suspect that may be the issue that leaves your voice like 'reportage'. You may just be limiting yourself and your creative imagination by the word count instead of using it to dispense with some of the literary touchstones such as description or plot. Character will, nay must come through the voice. You haven't time to ascribe traits to a character. And language, word choice yields character in flash.

While flash and novel are different crafts, they are not mutually exclusive. If you can master word usage in flash, it can only strengthen novel writing, even though the reader can't hold 75000 words in their memory, there can still be little word detonations of surprising word combinations within a phrase or sentence that leave the reader in no doubt that you are a vituoso of language.
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dancingsue
 10 Nov 2011, 16:35 #134782 Reply To Post
I've had a bit of success with flash pieces over the past eighteen months and I agree with sulcus. It may not come easily but a strong voice is essential in a 500 word piece. It's an ideal opportunity to experiment with voices and formats and it can only help your novel-writing unless, like me, you eventually find it hard to write anything longer! I'd recommend reading some winning and shortlisted stories.

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WendyOgden
 11 Nov 2011, 06:30 #134813 Reply To Post
Useful website on flash here:

http://www.everydayfiction.com/flashfictionblog/



Tommi
 11 Nov 2011, 09:11 #134823 Reply To Post
May 16th of next year is going to be the first National Flash Fiction day

http://nationalflashfictionday.blogspot.com/


There are some high profile flashers like Tania Hershman already on board, and a raft of events nationally (I'm running a flash slam in Oxford if anyone fancies it).
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ajblack4567
 11 Nov 2011, 12:05 #134845 Reply To Post
Thanks guys, that's all very useful.

Am reassured to learn that you all think it is possible to make your writer's voice heard, even in such a short piece, but now must figure out how I can manage it!

Maybe I'm overly puritanical - sometimes I feel a wee bit sad when I cut a bit of description I like, just to save me thirteen words. But I guess it's a bit like physical exercise - no pain, no gain.

I can't seem to find many decent FF sites online though - any other recommendations, beyond the two above, now bookmarked for more leisurely perusal?
This post was last edited by ajblack4567, 11 Nov 2011, 12:07
My story, 'An Encounter' - as improved by YWOers - is available in this anthology:

Speech Bubble Magazine Best Of Issues 1, 2 & 3 ebook

dancingsue
 11 Nov 2011, 13:44 #134856 Reply To Post
Lots of epublishing sites run flash fiction comps - you'd have to do some googling, but On The Premises and Flash500 are two regular ones. The judges on F500 always say what they're looking for, which is handy.
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It doesn't have to be 'your' (the author's) voice telling the story. Use one of your characters or get inside someone else. You really don't need any description to get a character across if you get the voice right.
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Destinyschild
 11 Nov 2011, 14:03 #134858 Reply To Post
I've just entered a flash fiction competetition at www.multi-story.co.uk. Generous prize money for six hundred words.

The site is aimed at writers of short fiction but there's stuff there which will be of general interest to all writers. I had to smile at the 'Peer Review; The Blind leading the Blind?' piece.

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