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Having spent three hours re-formatting, editing and correcting your piece before reviewing it comprehensively, your questions at the end of the submission routine made no sense (one of them asks why he 'tilted his head' but I could find no trace of this in the piece and I thought I had the other answers correct), so I could not submit it.
If you are not getting any reviews, this could be why!
I have saved the corrected piece and the review but if it goes past the 12th Jan, I won't be credited with it so if you would like this (or any) review, please amend your questions/answers quick as you like!
Hugs Galadrielle x
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