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FLASHECHOES
 16 Jan 2010, 10:45 #80185 Reply To Post
Well that's one opinion, and a British one. There may be a pond differential here. For example, I note that the Brits put periods and question marks outside of quote marks, whereas in America the only punctuation marks that belong outside of quote marks are colons and semi-colons.



I believe for 'normal' dialogue, punctuation is the same in Britain and the USA. (Though, single quote marks seem more prevalent here.)

The differences are however apparent in situations where the narrator or a character is (without the use of tags such as 'she said') quoting someone else. The same applies to the punctuation treatment in the highlighting of cliched phrases or euphamisms.

Examples:

From the American writer John Grisham's 'The Appeal':-

The "Big One," the perfect case with clear liability and a defendent with...

instead of how I would write it:-

The "Big One", the perfect case with...

And

From the UK biographer Claire Tomalin's 'Thomas Hardy - A Time Torn Man':-

'A Countenance' is about an attractive woman whose laugh was not 'in the middle of her mouth quite'.

would be punctuated in the USA as (I think)

"A Countenance" is about an attractive woman whose laugh was not "in the middle of her mouth quite."







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Carole
 16 Jan 2010, 11:34 #80189 Reply To Post
Yes, agreed. (As far as I know) in the UK, single quote marks are used for quotations, with only those particular words enclosed. So, naturally any other punctuation appertaining to the sentence would fall outside.

The American version looks a bit peculiar!
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gabriella
 16 Jan 2010, 14:05 #80191 Reply To Post

'A Countenance' is about an attractive woman whose laugh was not 'in the middle of her mouth quite'.

would be punctuated in the USA as (I think)

"A Countenance" is about an attractive woman whose laugh was not "in the middle of her mouth quite."


Actually, in the US (and this is the way I was taught all those years ago; today, it may be different), book titles are bolded and underlined, magazine articles, short stories, are in double quotes and depending on the source, sometimes italicized. In this example, "in the middle of her mouth quite" would actually be in single quotes as it is not a direct quote but rather a quoted reference.






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pipio
 16 Jan 2010, 14:12 #80192 Reply To Post
I prefer the ‘American’ double quotes system because it has some advantages (it’s not really an American thing, just that UK publishers prefer single quotes).
This piece of dialogue looks like it has double quotes at the end which may confuse a reader,

‘He’s ‘out on a limb’’

But it’s clearer, IMO, here:

“He’s ‘out on a limb’”
Although it depends where you put your punctuation mark of course, but that's another discussion.
This post was last edited by pipio, 16 Jan 2010, 14:32
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datahog
 16 Jan 2010, 22:35 #80221 Reply To Post
Quote: Keel, Saturday, 16 Jan 2010 09:11
You're right datahog.
In dialogue, question, exclamation marks etc should always be within single or double inverted comas; it’s not ‘an across the pond thing’.


Oh, so you Brits are just undereducated as a group then? Pardon my mistake.
Keel
 16 Jan 2010, 22:52 #80222 Reply To Post
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Nestat
 16 Jan 2010, 23:18 #80223 Reply To Post
Quote: datahog, Saturday, 16 Jan 2010 22:35
Oh, so you Brits are just undereducated as a group then? Pardon my mistake.


Well, I don't have the benefit of an American edumacation, but I feel you ought to have noticed Keel's "in dialogue" qualifier.

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