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PERRY
 10 Dec 2011, 09:31 #136757 Reply To Post
Free Will reviews being begged here. This story is in dire need of authenticity and helpful hands, thumps, kicks and chainsaws. I've become far too fond of it and am not at all qualified to know where to start paring. It's not often you'll get me in this state of desperation over a story so dig in. All comers welcome.
dancingsue
 10 Dec 2011, 10:26 #136763 Reply To Post
Which one is it?
the long and the short of it

sod
 10 Dec 2011, 13:06 #136774 Reply To Post
Hi is it A Lucky Escape by any chance? If it is, I'll take a look.
Lisa.
PERRY
 11 Dec 2011, 00:15 #136805 Reply To Post
Quote: sod, Saturday, 10 Dec 2011 13:06
Hi is it A Lucky Escape by any chance? If it is, I'll take a look.
Lisa.


Yes, Lisa thank you. dancingsue - beneath you.
dancingsue
 11 Dec 2011, 10:26 #136814 Reply To Post
Quote: PERRY, Sunday, 11 Dec 2011 00:15
Quote: sod, Saturday, 10 Dec 2011 13:06
Hi is it A Lucky Escape by any chance? If it is, I'll take a look.
Lisa.


Yes, Lisa thank you. dancingsue - beneath you.


Beneath me what? To read it?
the long and the short of it

PERRY
 11 Dec 2011, 10:33 #136816 Reply To Post
Quote: dancingsue, Sunday, 11 Dec 2011 10:26
Quote: PERRY, Sunday, 11 Dec 2011 00:15
Quote: sod, Saturday, 10 Dec 2011 13:06
Hi is it A Lucky Escape by any chance? If it is, I'll take a look.
Lisa.


Yes, Lisa thank you. dancingsue - beneath you.


Beneath me what? To read it?


Sorry dancingsue - a little worse for wear at the time and thought you were having a dig. Lucky Escape.

dancingsue
 11 Dec 2011, 10:41 #136817 Reply To Post
Just saw your reply to sod. I'll get back to you.
This post was last edited by dancingsue, 11 Dec 2011, 10:42
the long and the short of it

katarina66
 12 Dec 2011, 08:54 #136871 Reply To Post
Quote: dancingsue, Saturday, 10 Dec 2011 10:26
Which one is it?


I'll take a look. I'm sick of sitting waiting for reviews as well. things have never been so slow.
Follow the Dove
Scartongarth
PERRY
 12 Dec 2011, 15:21 #136904 Reply To Post
Thanks everyone so far, you have been immensely helpful. Let me know if I can return the favour.
rosefitzrobert
 12 Dec 2011, 21:05 #136926 Reply To Post
Quote: PERRY, Monday, 12 Dec 2011 15:21
Thanks everyone so far, you have been immensely helpful. Let me know if I can return the favour.


Perry, I'd be most grateful if you'd read my work and comment. The one on top. (revised opening)
This post was last edited by rosefitzrobert, 12 Dec 2011, 21:06
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