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Marita Hansen
 03 Feb 2010, 05:16 #81186 Reply To Post
Hi, Ricardo. Thanks for your review. I need another 7 assigned reviews to be put on the countdown.

Looks like I need to make that scene clearer, with the Police, as others have commented about being confused whether it's real or a dream. It's real, but in the next scene she wakes up and it becomes like a recurring nightmare. I will have to fix it.

I had your cousin Damian comment on how he liked the contrast between the two cousins and mentioned your name. You'll be interested to know there is another set of cousins in the story (it relates to Reprebus). The events that surround them are A LOT more sinister in context. It relates to past events which defines Reprebus' character.

Thanks for your comment on my book title. I intend on writing more in this series (at least 6) and all are named after the colours of the rosary/demon beads. (The demon beads are only briefly mentioned in "The Blue Curse" and will feature alongside the legendary rosaries in the next book called "The Black Merge," which I've started writing).

Thanks again for your comments.

Ciao, Marita.

Rossi101
 03 Feb 2010, 05:21 #81187 Reply To Post
Quote: Marita Hansen, Wednesday, 3 Feb 2010 05:16
Hi, Ricardo. Thanks for your review. I need another 7 assigned reviews to be put on the countdown.

Looks like I need to make that scene clearer, with the Police, as others have commented about being confused whether it's real or a dream. It's real, but in the next scene she wakes up and it becomes like a recurring nightmare. I will have to fix it.

I had your cousin Damian comment on how he liked the contrast between the two cousins and mentioned your name. You'll be interested to know there is another set of cousins in the story (it relates to Reprebus). The events that surround them are A LOT more sinister in context. It relates to past events which defines Reprebus' character.

Thanks for your comment on my book title. I intend on writing more in this series (at least 6) and all are named after the colours of the rosary/demon beads. (The demon beads are only briefly mentioned in "The Blue Curse" and will feature alongside the legendary rosaries in the next book called "The Black Merge," which I've started writing).

Thanks again for your comments.

Ciao, Marita.



Ciao, Marita.
I now understand what you were getting at. I can't wait to see your next book, sounds interesting. I can't wait to read about the twins. It was a fun reading your book. I have to be going, I have work.

Ciao, Ricardo.

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