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LitFit
 30 May 2007, 13:22 #18483 Reply To Post
Title : Clean Water 2nd Revision – New upload

Author : Josie Henley-Einion

Genre : Gay/Lesbian Fiction, Novel, Science Fiction, Fantasy

Review by Dana G

"Great improvements

The original version of this story was the first I reviewed for YWO and I think you have made some great improvements ...

You have a great talent and I have little doubt that this will be published. I'm hoping it will. I want a copy."

Synopsis
In a future dystopia, clean water is scarce. Britain has become a dangerous place for anyone not a member of the Christian-Muslim Alliance. Mayaa finds a baby on her doorstep which leads to her and her lover Rhiannon having to leave their home. Note, this has been updated a second time.
Enter any story title into the search function on the top right hand corner of the site to read the opening chapters.
josiehenley
 12 Jun 2007, 08:23 #18767 Reply To Post
Thanks
"I have nothing to declare except my genius" Oscar Wilde www.josiehenley.net
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