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 27 Jul 2008, 15:08 #40236 Reply To Post


Title : Charlie

Author : S O'Tierney

Genre : Literary Fiction

Review Extract from Review By: Fairy Queen

"Brilliant

This is an excellent piece of poignant writing and I cannot criticize it. There are a few minor errors, which I'm certain you will pick up on a re-read. I wasn't sure what SEVOT stood for, and I think at the end, when Louie was talking, you should have used 'sure' instead of 'shur'. I'm postive you will be able to place this work. You thanked readers for persevering, but that was unnecessary,I couldn't have put your story down if I'd tried ... Well done and good luck"

Synopsis
A father muses on his son
Enter any story title into the search function on the top right hand corner of the site to read the opening chapters.
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