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sulcus
 06 Jun 2009, 15:48 #60548
Saxon @, I am editing a book towards self-publishing (hopefully) so am a bit tied up for the next few days. Will endeavour to chase away the rainclouds for you when I have finished.

Bests
"A,B&E", "Not In My Name" and "52FF" (flash fiction anthology) all available on Amazon Kindle

"How a psychopath makes sweet love. I can get you ringside. Royal box even."
Saxon Annie
 06 Jun 2009, 16:23 #60553
Quote: sulcus, Saturday, 6 Jun 2009 15:48
Saxon @, I am editing a book towards self-publishing (hopefully) so am a bit tied up for the next few days. Will endeavour to chase away the rainclouds for you when I have finished.

Bests


Thany you my Lord I shall await with bated breath.
Good luck with the book.
Athene
 06 Jun 2009, 18:03 #60561
Yes, go away and get on with it, Marc! I want to see how you tackle the inappropriately named Dark Ages.


Scias te fortasse Romanum esse si animal convivialissimum arbitreris esse caprum
(Henricus Barbatus)


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sulcus
 06 Jun 2009, 18:14 #60563
Quote: Athene, Saturday, 6 Jun 2009 18:03
Yes, go away and get on with it, Marc! I want to see how you tackle the inappropriately named Dark Ages.


Through a glass darkly I imagine.

Or a power cut

"A,B&E", "Not In My Name" and "52FF" (flash fiction anthology) all available on Amazon Kindle

"How a psychopath makes sweet love. I can get you ringside. Royal box even."
Ais
 11 Jun 2009, 15:55 #61081
In the darkness just before dawn, old Silas Olde stopped on the lane to listen.

A screech owl, drowsy now from a night of calling into the dark, remained the only sound he could hear, other than a light wind in the leaves, carrying the scent of rain. With a last look around to see if any distant car lights could be seen approaching, he left the road, silent and practised.

Under the deeper dark amongst the trees, he trod carefully for a few yards until he knew the tall ferns would hide him completely from sight. He flicked on the small pen-light and carried on along the narrow path.

Thirty yards further into the woodland, he left the path, wary for signs of others' passage. None could be seen.

Faint amongst the breeze, he could hear the light sounds of the brook and continued with measured steps towards it. Times had been lean recently, not only for himself on a pension, but for the land too. Cold weather and more rain than winter culling the normal bustle of activities of the woods. A slight improvement yesterday had goaded him to go out and set his traps.

Stronger now, the brook's sound guided him to it. There! He knealt stiffly beside the trap and shone his light inside.

Empty. The bait had lain untouched since sunset. Not even a nibble.

Straightening, suddenly weary, he pushed his cap back to scratch his head. Things had never been this bad.
This post was last edited by Ais, 11 Jun 2009, 15:56
Work as if you live in the early days of a better nation - Alasdair Gray
sulcus
 11 Jun 2009, 16:38 #61083
I would replace the word 'trap' with gin.

Actually I would replace many a concept with gin, but that's just me.

Juniper not concur ?

Good work again Ais !

I'm definitely ducking the Dark Ages gauntlet thrown down to me
"A,B&E", "Not In My Name" and "52FF" (flash fiction anthology) all available on Amazon Kindle

"How a psychopath makes sweet love. I can get you ringside. Royal box even."
Ais
 11 Jun 2009, 17:34 #61086
Gin sounds fine by me.

As to the dark age gauntlet, it's always best to duck, those things can hurt!
Work as if you live in the early days of a better nation - Alasdair Gray
Saxon Annie
 11 Jun 2009, 17:37 #61087
Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 11 Jun 2009 16:38
I would replace the word 'trap' with gin.

Actually I would replace many a concept with gin, but that's just me.

Juniper not concur ?

Good work again Ais !

I'm definitely ducking the Dark Ages gauntlet thrown down to me


You are definitely ducking it, coward. I expected great things, it doesn't have to be in Saxon, although that would be clever.
Well done Ais, good one.
Looks like I shall have to have a go at Medieval myself since my minstrel went on walkabout.
Message for you on other thread Sulcus about Great vowel shift in 7th century.
Ais
 11 Jun 2009, 17:44 #61088
Thanks all, the 'gin' worked and now the bait of a credit has been taken! I wonder what kind of beastie has been caught!
Work as if you live in the early days of a better nation - Alasdair Gray
fudgefase
 11 Jun 2009, 19:21 #61097
There are some strange beasties out there at the moment. Good luck....
Happy Christmas poppets!
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