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Prometheus X
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The Time Capsule This was the most purile piece of nonsense I have ever had the misfortune to read. By the end of chapter 3 I gave up. I can say wank and toss and cunnypot with the rest of them so this is not from someone easily offended - it was simply boring drivel. I like comedy but this wasn't funny - not witty, not clever, not even slap-stick - just crude and juvenile. I tried to think of something positive to say but the only vision I have is that you are writing about yourself. The best bit about the whole thing was the bookcover - that was neat. Otherwise, it was just sad - I gave it a 2 for finding the thing in a fossil but otherwise it was 1s all the way . I'm not even going to apologise as it may be you are seeking re-actions.... here's mine. David Kotok
I don't make predictions, and I never will - Paul Gascoigne ex-England footballer.
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Annie Wicking
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Quote: Prometheus X, Sunday, 10 May 2009 19:20The Time Capsule This was the most purile piece of nonsense I have ever had the misfortune to read. If I was you just inhale deeply and let it out and say hey, okay so my work isn't to everyones liking and that's good otherwise we'll all be writing 'Mills & Boon'. Have you read his work? If not give him a Free Will and tell him honestly what you think.... Good luck with your writing
The worst thing that can happen to a writer is to become a Writer. Mary McCarthyThe fact is, writing can be done only during the time when one ought to be doing something else. Isabel Paterson
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Ais
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There is a 'report this review' link way down there underneath each review received - it's for breach of rules cases and Ted will deal with it if he decides it qualifies. Just a thought.
Work as if you live in the early days of a better nation - Alasdair Gray
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Prometheus X
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Quote: Annie Wicking, Sunday, 10 May 2009 19:36Quote: Prometheus X, Sunday, 10 May 2009 19:20Have you read his work? If not give him a Free Will and tell him honestly what you think.... Good luck with your writing Thanks Annie, Sounds like good advice. I had a quick read of the first 3 paragraphs of his work, but it looked like the usual formulaic creative writing rubbish that I've trawled through hundreds of times before on this site, so I'll probably give it a miss. I have better things to do with my time. Prometheus X
I don't make predictions, and I never will - Paul Gascoigne ex-England footballer.
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YouWriteOn
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We've removed the review and sent you a reading credit in this instance. Please report reviews by the report review button rather than posting here, with many different topics on the board issues may otherwise not be seen.
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Ted
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