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marthatandy
 26 May 2008, 14:06 #34390 Reply To Post
Hello Ally - I have just spent an hour or so reviewing 'Edgar' only to fail the reading test.

Had two attempts at it, but only got three out of five questions right. I'm sure Ted will contact you, but you might want to simplify it. For example - how did he damage his hand? It could have been self-harm, we might never know, or it could have been a drunken accident? I would opt for the drunken accident but 'we might never know' is also true.

Seems such a shame - I had cut and pasted my review into the review box and then deleted it off my laptop so have lost all the comments I made.

Just don't want you to lose reviews because of this.

Regards, Jan.

P.S. I would be happy to re-review or do a freewill for you if you like? You can always leave a message here on the board.
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