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Fantasy
 21 Jun 2007, 13:32 #19055 Reply To Post
Title : A Desert Song

Author : LisaP

Genre : Adventure, Fantasy

Review By: NickP

"Very Good

This starts with a whole lot of "tell" - you have a raid, a rape and escape and I don't think tou get the most out of these situations. But it's rip-roaring stuff.

But slowly, oddly, you drag me in. I loved Zillah and I am desperate to know what happens next.

Excellent stuff ..."


Synopsis
In a desert land out of the sight of God, Al-Shaitan seizes the beautiful Princess Sima. Can Captain Lars save her?


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